Intro Letter:
I am rewriting the ending this is when, Romeo recives a letter from Friar Lauence saying Juliet has taken a posion but she will wake in 48 hours. Romeo is to go in 48 hours to Juliet and they can be together at last. He gets ready to go see Juliet and trys to come up with something to say to Paris when he goes to see her. He figures he will just tell the truth and if Paris commmets on it which he wil, he’s gonna kill Paris. He brings a sword just in case Paris isn’t gonna let him see Juliet. He is on his way to Juliet he is determined to see her! Paris is there and he asks why Romeo is there he says he is there to seee Juliet and Paris doesn’t like that at all he takes out a sword of his own. Romeo then takes out his sword, he says I wonder who’s gonna win this fight. Romeo believes it is him because he loves Juliet and he will do anything to be with her. Read my ending and you will see what happens.
Rewriting the ending:
Act 5
scene:1
Juliet: Can you bring this letter to Romeo please it is important it ife or death, so do it as soon as possible.
Friar: Sure, I can do that for you no problem.
Juliet: Thanks much.
Friar: Romeo here is a note from Juliet this is very important so read it as soon as I give it to you.
Romeo:Oh I will, much thanks Friar this means a lot to me.
Friar: Your welcome I hope all is well with Juliet.
Romeo: Me to
Friar: Well I will leave you to it
Romeo: Bye thanks again.
Friar: Yup
Scene: 2
Romeo: Oh no why would she do this, now everyone thinks she’s dead. She didn’t have to this for me. But i am glad she did as long as she wakes up in 48 hours like she said she will. I am off to Juliet’s right now! I better hurry before she wakes up and everyone knows she alive.
Paris: What are you doing here be gone with you!
Romeo: No! I came to see my love!
Paris well you will have to go through me first (as he pulls out his sword)
Romeo: Oh Paris you make me laugh, I brought my own sword as well! (as he pulls out his sword)
Paris: Why would you dare to come and see her, that is done and over with Romeo
Romeo: What do you know Paris ?
Paris: I know it was all a game I know she isn’t really dead, I saw the letter
Romeo: but how
Paris: does it matter, all that matters is I know.
Romeo: Well what ever I am going to see her, get out of my way if you dont want to die!
Paris: I would like to see you try Roemo
Romeo: Well you said it! (he pulls his sword out and stabs Paris in the chest)
Paris: (falls to the floor and is dead)
Romeo: How’s that Paris ?!
Scene: 3
Juliet: Oh my Romeo!
Romeo: Juliet my love your awake
Juliet: You killed Paris!
Romeo: Yeh if I wouldn’t have killed him he would have killed me
Juliet: likely story just like Tybalt right, Romeo you need to leave!
Romeo: I did this for us love
Juliet: killing a man is not ok Romeo really? What were you thinking?
Roemo: Sweetie I did this for us
Juliet: Shut up Roemo, your a killer ! I don’t love you anymore
Romeo: Yes you do!
Scene:4
Juliet: (Juliet picks up sword and killes Romeo) no I don’t ha!! I shall probably balme this on somebody but I’m not sure who ?? oh maybe the nurse I never liked her much! (screams) Oh my !! What happened ?
Lord Capulet: Juliet my dear what happened ? (sees dead body) Oh ! What the heck who did this ?
Juliet: I really don’t know daddy!
Lord Capulet: Oh I just noticed your alive what how are you alive?
Juliet: The nurse gave me some posion and tried to kill me but it just put me to sleep.
Lored Capulet: (yells) NURSE!
Nurse: Yes sir?
Lord Capulet: Don’t yes sir me how could you do that to Juliet?
Nurse: Do what ?
Lord Capulet: YOU POSIONED HER!
Nurse: No I did not!
Lord Capulet: (yells) Prince!
Prince: Yes ?
Lord Capulet: Kill her
Prince: Why?
Lord Capulet: She attempted to ill my daughter !
Prince: Are you for sure ?
Lord Capulet: Yes
Prince: Ok than (chops the nurses head off)
Juliet: She also killed Roemo and Paris I saw it with my own eyes!
Prince: She is...I mean was a bad women!
Juliet: I am glad she is dead!
Lord Capulet: Oh aren’t we all !!
I am rewriting the ending this is when, Romeo recives a letter from Friar Lauence saying Juliet has taken a posion but she will wake in 48 hours. Romeo is to go in 48 hours to Juliet and they can be together at last. He gets ready to go see Juliet and trys to come up with something to say to Paris when he goes to see her. He figures he will just tell the truth and if Paris commmets on it which he wil, he’s gonna kill Paris. He brings a sword just in case Paris isn’t gonna let him see Juliet. He is on his way to Juliet he is determined to see her! Paris is there and he asks why Romeo is there he says he is there to seee Juliet and Paris doesn’t like that at all he takes out a sword of his own. Romeo then takes out his sword, he says I wonder who’s gonna win this fight. Romeo believes it is him because he loves Juliet and he will do anything to be with her. Read my ending and you will see what happens.
Rewriting the ending:
Act 5
scene:1
Juliet: Can you bring this letter to Romeo please it is important it ife or death, so do it as soon as possible.
Friar: Sure, I can do that for you no problem.
Juliet: Thanks much.
Friar: Romeo here is a note from Juliet this is very important so read it as soon as I give it to you.
Romeo:Oh I will, much thanks Friar this means a lot to me.
Friar: Your welcome I hope all is well with Juliet.
Romeo: Me to
Friar: Well I will leave you to it
Romeo: Bye thanks again.
Friar: Yup
Scene: 2
Romeo: Oh no why would she do this, now everyone thinks she’s dead. She didn’t have to this for me. But i am glad she did as long as she wakes up in 48 hours like she said she will. I am off to Juliet’s right now! I better hurry before she wakes up and everyone knows she alive.
Paris: What are you doing here be gone with you!
Romeo: No! I came to see my love!
Paris well you will have to go through me first (as he pulls out his sword)
Romeo: Oh Paris you make me laugh, I brought my own sword as well! (as he pulls out his sword)
Paris: Why would you dare to come and see her, that is done and over with Romeo
Romeo: What do you know Paris ?
Paris: I know it was all a game I know she isn’t really dead, I saw the letter
Romeo: but how
Paris: does it matter, all that matters is I know.
Romeo: Well what ever I am going to see her, get out of my way if you dont want to die!
Paris: I would like to see you try Roemo
Romeo: Well you said it! (he pulls his sword out and stabs Paris in the chest)
Paris: (falls to the floor and is dead)
Romeo: How’s that Paris ?!
Scene: 3
Juliet: Oh my Romeo!
Romeo: Juliet my love your awake
Juliet: You killed Paris!
Romeo: Yeh if I wouldn’t have killed him he would have killed me
Juliet: likely story just like Tybalt right, Romeo you need to leave!
Romeo: I did this for us love
Juliet: killing a man is not ok Romeo really? What were you thinking?
Roemo: Sweetie I did this for us
Juliet: Shut up Roemo, your a killer ! I don’t love you anymore
Romeo: Yes you do!
Scene:4
Juliet: (Juliet picks up sword and killes Romeo) no I don’t ha!! I shall probably balme this on somebody but I’m not sure who ?? oh maybe the nurse I never liked her much! (screams) Oh my !! What happened ?
Lord Capulet: Juliet my dear what happened ? (sees dead body) Oh ! What the heck who did this ?
Juliet: I really don’t know daddy!
Lord Capulet: Oh I just noticed your alive what how are you alive?
Juliet: The nurse gave me some posion and tried to kill me but it just put me to sleep.
Lored Capulet: (yells) NURSE!
Nurse: Yes sir?
Lord Capulet: Don’t yes sir me how could you do that to Juliet?
Nurse: Do what ?
Lord Capulet: YOU POSIONED HER!
Nurse: No I did not!
Lord Capulet: (yells) Prince!
Prince: Yes ?
Lord Capulet: Kill her
Prince: Why?
Lord Capulet: She attempted to ill my daughter !
Prince: Are you for sure ?
Lord Capulet: Yes
Prince: Ok than (chops the nurses head off)
Juliet: She also killed Roemo and Paris I saw it with my own eyes!
Prince: She is...I mean was a bad women!
Juliet: I am glad she is dead!
Lord Capulet: Oh aren’t we all !!